Wednesday, November 28, 2007

Believe In What You Want Comments

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My mother told me to believe in God.
My father told me to believe in whatever I wanted.
My brother told me that it doesn’t matter what
you believe, just as long as you believe in something.
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Keith Gaboury
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Ivan Hobson 07 March 2010

I think the poem ends at 'pretend to pray.' The last line might echo the father's words too much. It also takes away from the impact of being a Christian but not trying to show off with it. I might be biased though; since I'm a Christian that doesn't like preach or show off much.

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Keith Gaboury

Berkley, CA
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