Believe in what you are and not what you see
It is holy message meant for us from Thee
Do what you can and is within your capacity
It is right thing to perform from within as best quality
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really really really great poem.............. and it's amazingly rhymed... love it... deep meanings.... true concepts... nice... really nice... love this one so much... it reminds me of some popular great poet here in the Gulf... truly amazing! ! ! !
I will just use the word, 'perfect' for this poem. I give you 10 per cent
A good poem based on true philosophy of life. Well written one, inspiring too. Some little corrections came in my mind while reading, you can think over it if I'm right. 'it is if fact very easy if you decide rightly' - hope the line needs to be 'it is in fact every easy if you decide rightly'. 'Echo in your your inner conscience is allowing' - this line needs reconstruction to make the meaning more clear as your other lines of the poem do. “I” is no where in picture and to be placed before - make it 'nowhere'. Thank you sharing a nice poem. Gautam
Well expressed.10 for content.Good and nice flow write.I like this stanza coz my hear really thrilled with it. Nothing comes on the way when you are clear You are so sure of your goal, without any fear It is not only your belief that comes to matter Life becomes easy and good if not better Thanks for sharing
wow so wonderful poem..you deserve 10 for that.everday ill have new poems to submit come and read mine too..keepsafe
really you are delivering your speech like a saint to save the individual. bravo man keep your struggle alive as long as you can but don't sell your own eyes to look at yourself. God bess you!
Great poem with real philosophy of life. Well expressed. Amazing rhymed. Enjoyed reading it