Sunday, May 31, 2009

Believe In Me? Comments

Rating: 3.9

If I told you I tried real hard
would you believe me?
If I spoke to you about how I feel
would you believe me?
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Angelic Warrior
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Adi Cox 10 July 2009

This poem addresses the problems and comlexities of communication in relationships. Sometimes it is impossible to believe someone. If I said 'I am a liar' would you beleive me? This is a paradox. Nice poem.10/10.

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Lady Grace 14 June 2009

believe in me and trust..believe in me and stay..believe in me and let's enjoy together the life..this is a beautiful poem..grace

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sky dreams 14 June 2009

this reminds me of my relationship with my father.. very good thoughts expressed very well.10

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~ Jon London ~ 13 June 2009

Thanks for the share of this wonderful piece...this gives much to reflect on...thank you...well penned

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