Wednesday, January 23, 2008

Believe, Hope And Dream Comments

Rating: 5.0

I invested in time so you can talk
I invested in hope so you can dream
I invested in dream so you can believe
I invested my words so you can vision
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Fasika Ayalew
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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 26 November 2008

Believe, hope, dream and vision...Good and timely investment in time...you will have many folds return...A beautiful poem indeed....10/10.

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Nathaniel Booker 01 September 2008

I really enjoyed this piece, Fasika, I am always drawn to pieces that inspire and this one is nothing short of remarkable. I would suggest changing the word 'vision' in 'I vision' and one other place to 'I envision' (just a suggestion) . Regardless, this piece is powerful and renewing of heart. **10** N8 (Nate)

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Fasika Ayalew

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