Believe & Forgive Comments

nice one! keep it up

lovely piece. If Almighty Allah can forgive, , who are we to refuse?

That is so poetic...touching...sigh...as long as you believe...then what could go wrong...smiles.

Wow~~ what a rhythmic poem! ! ! It's great! ! ! :)

I read this poem and began humming it as if it were a tune. Keep up the good Work

This was beautifully writing and true

Only one word (Amazing) +10

i all ready feel apart everythinng is soo stressful but anyways i this poem is my most favorite

forgiveness is the key to the door that opens into life.. you inspire me to write more.. thank you

Very amazing subject: D your faith is so strong, and your words so true. You just got to keep your faith in the Almighty and everything will work out ^.^ amazing work! Keep it up!

forgiveness is the key to the door that opens into life... like this one a lot!

Subhanallah...yet another exceptional write brother Aqeb! ! The message is very vital and the rhyme is just perfect...I like the line 'Nothing feels wrong, While nature sings song' - when you hear the birds sing and twitter, you feel so wonderful! ! I do not understand why some people here are suggesting this is off pace a little but to me and to all Muslim poets who have commented here feels differently, and seriously people? Aqeb has done A LOT of beautiful pieces...I guess it's true what they say - The greater you become, greater the criticism arise even if it's by 1 inch in a tiny corner... The rhymes go very well! ! ! This is a couplet, it follows the order nicely: - apart, away, heart, way, wrong, song, along, gone, deceive, heed, believe, forgive ...This rhyme can't get any more rhythmic! It's short and perfect the way it is. 10/10 Masha'Allah! continue your write for Allah my friend! !

This poem has made my day. keep it up

short but meaningful.. good job.. keep writing :)

you are really a good poet dear. thanks for sharing. i enjoyed your lines.

love the rhymes..a very meaningful poem...it made me realized something that i haven't been realizing for a long time

thanks for sharing this with us. I like your poem very and and I really appreciate this........ You are a fantastic poet. I like your way of writing... great

Wow this poems give message to people and tell us to keeping on holding and believe.10++ You first person that i think have gift of writing poems and that what you have. Keep up the fanastic job

A lovely write, simple and to the point but inspiring and meaningful as well...though in terms of constructive criticism, I would agree on the whole with the points stated in Robert Platt's comment (via Facebook) . A great poem nonetheless, I enjoyed reading it. -Leslie-

am a muslim and i agree with the message in the poem.nicely written!