Believe Comments

I love it, it's a really inspiring and beautiful poem, don't change a word of it! Athena *** words will change the world ***

WOW! ! i love this poem. it is really good. I am saving it a one of my favourites! Absolutely beautiful. Thanx! ! !

You have a good heart I love what you say in your poem which is why I've taken the trouble to tidy it up a bit as there were some spelling mistakes and the rhythm was a bit drunk. If you don't like me interferring just tell me. Ruthy: -D See below: You've lost your job The credit crunch put you down You pray to God to let you wake without a frown Everyone needs to believe in themselves Everyone needs to smile Theres a light beyond the tunnel Just believe in yourself for a while Try to shine the whole day through I'm sure all things can mend Just keep on believing All you need are kin and friends. I'm wishing for some happiness No cruelty no more If it helps, I will believe and pray, then pray some more Believe, Believe, Believe, Believe Try and try and try..... Do whatever it takes sweet friends don't sit and wonder why.