Would it be weird
if the long and lonely path of life
seemed like a glimpse
of what I expect.
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Dear Asef, Being so young you've been enlightened for writing such relevant thoughts! Keep up with your poem writing and you'll surely open gleaming 'paths of life' for all of us to walk through.
Very good dear asef. Poetry is a dream. Keep people dreaming. Greatest dream will be a greatest poem. Thanks.
powerful expression! nice imagery..........10+++