I'm too much in this race
That i must praise
Myself and I
But sometimes I feel
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A nice one.I hope u will write(Pray) for all the Poor Muslim people who are suffering bad all over the world in ur next poem.
I gave this a 9 because I consider this to be a prayer to Allah. This is a most wonderful prayer because it is a prayer of praise and not complaint. I am sure Allah responds to such prayers. I can do no less. Greenwolfe 1962
you are good in your intellectual and used very nicely the old rhyming style.