Belief-01 Comments

Short in preaching...preaching in short... only how we take to....interesting and clever10

Death for a life, Life for a death, In between two, We only to breath. and breath for sense killings...cheating and deception..... very good write read mine yes to to...siler line...dark nights

i really enjoyed it short but sweet 10+.

excellllllllent! ! great job done! ! 10+

aha, nice poem...this is for real i like it Luwi