Monday, February 5, 2007
Being With You Wasn'T Right Comments
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Being with you wasn't right,
But it did not stop me every night.
I just kept having all these mixed feelings
As I stared at the four walls and the ceiling.
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Jeff Fleischer
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Linda Winchell
10 November 2008
Good poem of words. Need to, if you are rhyming to contiue with that thought. This was something I was taught early on in my writings. But I loved what you had to say in this piece. God Bless, Linda
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7/19/2025 1:53:59 PM # 1.0.0
This poem is very true and relatable, I love it.