Monday, August 9, 2010

Being With You Comments

Rating: 3.6

Being with you for just
awhile
Shadows vanish with your
smile
...
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Heather Burns
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Sylvia Frances Chan 08 October 2024

Revisiting this great poem about LOVE means so much to me. I feel the closeness of the real meanings of this magic poem. I bow deepest for this loveliest poem about love. I feel the intimacy, the sweet sphere of the moment. I feel happiest rereading this poem again. Still TOP Marks, dear Heather!

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Rob Lamberton 02 March 2024

Love without end! !

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Harindhar Reddy 07 April 2020

Bingo! Dear Heather madam, being with our beloved one is classy feeling as you exhibited well in this little poem of yours. Keep writing and sharkng, hats off!

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Sylvia Frances Chan 31 August 2019

Like the calming of the sea Being with you means much to me. Excellent poem, sweetest rendered. Congrats, Heather. God's Blessings in Abundance for you.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 31 August 2019

Feeling the warmth of your touch Has come to mean so very much Being with your poem means so much to me, such a most beautiful feeling and so true and honest as life can be. Congratulations with your raking in the Top 500 poems, dear Heather. God Bless You.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 08 October 2024

small error: Congratulations with your ranking in the Top 500 poems, dear Heather. Now we have no Top 500 anymore, only BEST Member Poems.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 30 June 2019

I love this poem very very much. Thank you for submitting this JEWEL yimes ago, Heather. God´s Blessings in Abundance. WOW! On the Top 500 poems. CONGRATULATIONS.

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Mahtab Bangalee 24 June 2019

Being with you for just awhile Shadows vanish with your smile ..../// superb and great expression of love; love it as the written love

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Mahtab Bangalee 24 June 2019

Being with you thousands love come since the birth of loving sense

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Sylvia Frances Chan 11 April 2019

Love this poem very much, dear!

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Castellenas John 31 March 2019

A wonderful poem for love.

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Adiela Akoo 28 November 2018

The comfort of love.

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Marvin Brato 06 December 2017

Lovely write...being with someone you love is a heavenly feeling.

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Abhimanyu Kumar.s 21 November 2017

Being in you with you. Outstanding dear

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Sylvia Frances Chan 07 November 2017

WOW-WOW-WOW-WOW-WOW! ! ! ! ! I mean with these 5 WOWS, the VERY BEST intentions, since I was so surprised in the exciting shouts. Such a beautiful, loveliest poem. I love this poetry of you, dear Heather. A TEN sublimest for YOU. Best wishes and sincerely Sylvia Frances Chan

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Mary Mc Creath 03 June 2017

Warm and deep sentiments.

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Terry Upham 10 January 2016

Sleeping well with yourself I could not sleep well I'm a greatest Poet #WickedRomancer #poet #poetry #poem #ClassicPoetry #Crazylove #lovepoem #spillingwordslikes#poetryinmotion #poetsofinstagram #poemcrawl#haiku #philosophy #micropoetry #soothes

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Terry Upham 10 January 2016

The other people don't know or understand what a weak minded individual you are CHEATS CANT COMPETE SHES INCOMPLETE LOW ESTEEM NEVER TO GLEAM.

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Sophy Chen 23 November 2015

a very touching poem Sophy

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Nasarudheen Parameswaran 18 October 2015

A foaming love poem.I love the pattern and essense.

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Leloudia Migdali 02 August 2015

So much love in this poem! To love and get loved is a magical feeling!

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