Saturday, January 19, 2013

Being With Him Comments

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I was sitting by the fire
When it all came back to me
A rush of emotions
A kaleidoscope of memories
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Alla Simone 22 January 2013

Excellent. Can't even pick a favorite line. Love it cuz I lived it! ! ! Metaphors are on point as well. Kaleidescope of memories, Good pain, losing yourself, running into gunfire without cover. Going on my favs list for sure.

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Gajanan Mishra 19 January 2013

I did not care. good one. A poet is supreme. thanks. I invite you to read my poems and comment.

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