Tuesday, October 6, 2020

Being Very Realistic Comments

Rating: 5.0

We're All,
A little corrupt.
No, it's not crazy
To say,
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Sandra Feldman
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Bernard F. Asuncion 08 October 2020

A well created poem. Truly brilliant and superb...5 stars*****

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Deluke Muwanigwa 06 October 2020

I want to but the law scares me. Yah we live in Orwelian Dystopia. Corruption right at highest office filtering down to grassroots. Go on do it. Just dont get caught is the motto

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Belle Wassermeister 06 October 2020

I think you may have hit upon a truth. I love the wording of the last stanza.

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