Being Too Close To You Comments

amen to this, being too close to another takes the edge out of one's self. Alas, I'm feeling such pain now... but she is good and we together are good so, confused i am about my next action.

Being on the losing end is truly painful and your well crafted poem expresses your loss clearly. It is concise, well balanced and flows well. I don't agree with the reasoning though.Getting too close to the person you love and who loves you is hardly possible in my view, but I'd say that getting too close to the wrong person would be a problem! Just a thought. But good poetry. I think you have talent! jim

We tend to lose identity in someone else, so I get exactly what you're saying.Lovely poem. Hope you keep writing! Xs and Os, Colette