Friday, June 8, 2007

Being The Patient Comments

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The sunshine moves round and just reaches the bit
between my bed and the windowsill,
I squash myself down, barely able to fit,
feel the warmth on my face - and the world stands still.
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Rachel Slimm
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Toni O''neill 23 July 2007

This poem is great. I can totally relate to it. There's such a peace that can almost be felt from it, I can feel being there. x

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Hayle, Cornwall
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