Saturday, August 8, 2009

Being Teenagers Again Comments

Rating: 5.0

The flickering flecks of stardust
dance in your hair
as we run along the beach
being teenagers again
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David Harris
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Bob Blackwell 19 August 2009

Its fun to splash and play no matter what our age. There is apart of us that must ever not ever die, that part is the child. Great write, memories came as well. I splashed and paddled last year in the surf, it was fun. Your friend Bob

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Shashendra Amalshan 15 August 2009

I love reading these kinda stuff.. Hey filled with youthul exhubarance Filled with life, joy.. very free flowing language... always make my mind at ease.. Nice and I do mean it! ! ! ! ! ! ! loves shan

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Carol Gall 08 August 2009

agreat write reminds me of so many things thank you 10

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~ Jon London ~ 08 August 2009

David great work...loved the imagery within this wonderful piece a share of nature with youthful hearts.....excellent poem..... as always you deliver a fresh bowl of goodies 10++ for sure

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