Tuesday, June 23, 2009

Being So. Comments

Rating: 5.0

As you care for your love,
I too care the same way.
As you feel excited to see your love,
I too feel the same way.
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Y Sunita Devi
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Afzal Shauq 06 July 2009

You claim your love to be true, pure like the morning dew. Valuing it the most, Above anything else. But you are so untrue, When you say my love to be untrue. heartfelt imaginations and well written poem with rich and soul touching idea has expressed here with perfect way..well done..I really liked it very much and appreciate you dear friend..best of luck 10++++++++++++++++

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Kesav Easwaran 06 July 2009

Very sensible message there...people always tend to downgrade others feels...good write Winnie...thanks...10

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Ashraful Musaddeq 27 June 2009

'You make faces, And pass cruel comments When I say about my love, You do so not knowing, That I too feel the same way, With the same depth and feel in my heart, As you do for your love.' Soft and lovely and touching piece.

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Sebastine Humaemo 27 June 2009

ahhh dear t was tooo touchin....te way lines talkin abt both feelings awesome....n te line speakin abt ' untrue ' was a sweet way of pointin te wrong btwn lovin hearts.........i can rank this as one of yur most good works............loved it wit full heart....100++++++ sebastine

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You have poured out your emotions in this poem, all within the confines of poetry which is done so well. Thank God for writing I often say! Well done! 10 Karin Anderson

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~ Jon London ~ 23 June 2009

Wonderful expression used to paint your hearts voice....tenderly penned my dear Winnie...........keep penning....you have a gift

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