Des, what time is it?
Seventy two.
Not your age you silly bugger;
What's the right time?
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AMUSING.......really amusing..... humor in poetry to shove loneliness away piece that makes one giggles...i can just imagine me reaching seventy-two.... 10++++++++++++++
Just so. Time out, already! (and I am only 64 as of yesterday) . P.S. I wonder what Allie thinks of T McH's comment.
stimulating humour. i cannot comprehend what being 72 felt like.
Be grateful for the little things.... wouldn't it be worse were you asking, Seventy Who? ? Amused and amazed as usual Jerry.
This made me smile jerry, you've captured a lot in this slice of life piece. Sometimes I think we should just cancel time...jz
jerry - Very cute, but would be confusing to many of my neighbors, See my poem, 'The Secret of Old Age'. Best wishes - Cheryl
Never give up asking people the time. Now, this is a witty, cute-funny vignette, and I love it. The time exists for us to ask it. Put it in it's proper place. Great! xxElysabeth
Tee hee hee! (But you know you're only as old as the woman you feel :)) t x
Quirky, fey, great fun. Love this e e cummings style piece about forgetting. Allie xxxx
still laughing at 61...sorry 3.25..am....thanks..John