Monday, December 9, 2013

Being Of Wonder Comments

Rating: 4.5

Black eyes, as dark as midnight
And white skin like snow
Hair that reaches the ground
That seems to be like a white glow
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Angel Of The Night
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Khairul Ahsan 24 January 2014

'She holds the skull up in her hand And traces all the light, empty lines. The missing eyes and hair The nose that was once there she looks over at her lover With a smile full of wonder' My God! Quite scary!

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Abdallah Gamal 17 December 2013

Beautiful! ! ! ! You were brilliant here at using the perfect imagination, and the words that go along with the title, the way you used to write this poem attracts the reader mind to read it until the end, again I loved another picture of your works... +10 :)

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