Thursday, June 11, 2009

Being & Nothingness Comments

Rating: 5.0

If you want me to be
I will just be.
If you want me not to be
I still shall be.
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Amir Foroughi
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Mimi Mata 13 November 2012

If you want me to be I will just be. If you want me not to be I still shall be. Oh my redeemer, nothing can change the life Even the elemental force of your love In motion, Creation is essentially not the fact. Empowerment...Absolute Empowerment in it's raw beauty...

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Pheko Motaung 12 May 2012

A grand piece! I enjoyed reading this one.Also very good it can be read on many maybe philosophic and religious level.But the majestic ability belongs to you.Personally I am grateful because you shared with us who have learnt so much from you.Thank you

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Hans Vr 07 October 2011

I think this is meant as a parody on the abstract language of philosophers, sometimes going overboard in their seriousness about being and nothingness. I enjoyed the poem as such

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Cristina Teodor 06 October 2011

Wisdom resonates in your verses, a poem with deep meanings. Very well written..Cristina Teodor

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Unwritten Soul 28 September 2011

Being and Nothingness...like people ask Here but nowhere, a definition mot mean exact words but as long as you understand what it is about everything can be clear..This is a good abstract poem, maybe people can understand in their own way...like i do..keep it up_Unwritten Soul

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Abhimanyu Kumar.s 28 September 2011

simple words with deep stuff. well done keep it up

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Edward Kofi Louis 30 April 2010

A very nice piece of work. Keep it up that we may also learn from you. Thank you. E.K.L.

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Bijaylaxmi Sarangi 27 April 2010

It is really a beautiful poem conveying hidden truth of life.... :)

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Raj Nandy 08 March 2010

TO LIVE LIFE KING SIZE AND TO FEEL AND ENJOY ITS MOMENTS IS TO BE! NOT A PASSIVE EXISTENCE BUT AN ACTIVE INTELLECTUAL AND THOUGHTFUL EXISTENCE! FOR YOUR POEM 10! -Raj

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Marieta Maglas 05 September 2009

We are His creation so we can not exist without Him....Lovely abstract poem, very well written.Be blessed..10++++

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Ch J Satyananda Kumar 16 June 2009

A powerful poem. Though provoking. Kudos.

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