Tuesday, September 16, 2008

Being Me Comments

Rating: 2.9

I am a girl
Nothing more
Trying to tell the world
Not to close the door
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Laura Arwen 18 March 2021

very simple poem. I like it

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Akram Saqib 02 July 2017

literature has no religion but alas you have eulogized it. any way feelings are excellently depicted

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Jack Price 18 April 2009

Just keep on writing your poetry Amy, I really like this poem and I am looking forward to reading more of your poems soon........

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Emancipation Planz 22 November 2008

.. and sweetest Amy.. I reckon I have also seen your hand prints on the moon... keep righting them, one peace at a time... aroha Deana xx

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Ron Flowers 03 November 2008

A very nice poem. It's so important to have the courage to honestly say who you are. After reading it, I would say you have every reason to be pleased with who you are. Ron

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Elena Winters 29 October 2008

YOU ARE JUST BEING YOURSELF AND THERE'S NOTHIN WRONG WITH THAT SO IF ANY BODY HAS A PROBLEM WITH IT........FORGET THEM I LOVED IT........AMAZING PIECE

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Red Blooded Black Hearted 25 September 2008

Be true to yourself and be proud of it. Great poem.

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Kesav Easwaran 23 September 2008

a good girl who knows who she is...a good poem that this good girl writes...10 for you and for your poem, Amy...

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Roy Storey 21 September 2008

Its the only way be true to yourself. a nice poem.

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Tj Becker 20 September 2008

A girl that knows who she is and where she's going, great poem I loved the last part. 'I am who I am '.......not everyone does know haha cool write

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Paul Butters 20 September 2008

A neatly written, honest poem. I just wish childhood never ended.

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Aijaz Asif 19 September 2008

a very nice poem with nice put rhymes...nice write keep writing

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Jason Taylor 18 September 2008

I am a Christian I go to church with my friend I wish that my childhood Would never end thats a really good few line not a lot of people will admit they go to church talking or in a poem. i like this poem its a naked poem if you no what i mean your saying who you are and what u do and its great well done a 9 from me keep writting

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Alexandra Puddle 16 September 2008

such an awesome poem. i loved it. it is amazing how you can get everything you feel onto paper. well, the computer at least: P. i cant wait to read more

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Stacey Watts 16 September 2008

Being true to yourself is a wonderful thing. I wished we all could be so bold to take a stand for who we are.

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