Being Loved Comments
How she missed the illusion of being loved.
That joyful sensation of walking on air,
while accepting the volatile nature of change
hope became worn, too thin to share.
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I liked the smoothness of the narration. Soft and feather like touches of the feelings of the heart. 'Soft sighs often worn as a weary disguise until one day he left and her heart lay bare.' - Awesome! 'But once there was bliss, a lingering kiss. She just had to close her eyes, to be there' - Amazing! The poem deserves a 10/10 rating.
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7/23/2025 9:38:50 PM # 1.0.0
'love became weak and fed upon silence differences grew, recognized everywhere' Wow...very powerful images come from this. It's funny how very much alike couples can grow together and yet as they grow apart the changes are acutely stark........10