Tuesday, April 7, 2020

Being Locked-Down (English Sonnet) Comments

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Being locked-down on my very own,
it's almost as bad as been left behind,
while where the death virus is, is unknown,
where I do struggle real answers to find.
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Gert Strydom
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Akshaya Umeshkumar 23 August 2020

This poem is good........ yet I am requesting u to add a little bit in this my friend. coz this a good one.U had been talented by god my dear....I appreciate u.I will pray for u to live long...

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Prabir Gayen 07 April 2020

Fine poem dear friend... concern for dear and near one.. Sense of belongingness... But I think a little bit edit is needed...thanks

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