Monday, August 31, 2009

Being Jewish Comments

Rating: 4.5

Some say being Jewish is a weeping
of the heart,
while others say that it depends on keeping
apart
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Andrew Jacobson 24 April 2018

LOVE what you're doing with the line breaks here, the one-words and the rhyming. Gives the poem a really great flow and rhythm. And the relation between laughter and crying, great stuff. We Jews certainly love both. Keep up the writing!

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