LOVE what you're doing with the line breaks here, the one-words and the rhyming. Gives the poem a really great flow and rhythm. And the relation between laughter and crying, great stuff. We Jews certainly love both. Keep up the writing!
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LOVE what you're doing with the line breaks here, the one-words and the rhyming. Gives the poem a really great flow and rhythm. And the relation between laughter and crying, great stuff. We Jews certainly love both. Keep up the writing!