It was too hot,
a sunny Sunday,
she went to a beach,
a virgin bud,
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she wanted to strip she stripped for him couple of typos all else good ta Wes (Old Dad)
Great poem dear Akhtar, I read it on Kelly's 'Interpretation' page first and love it tremendously. You are truly gifted. Thank you.
Nice dedication to a fellow poet, we all get inspiration from one other's poem...Nicely penned Janab....
Marvellous expression. An enjoyable poem shared really. Thanks for sharing dear Jawad sir....10
An absorbing tale told in great details! Enjoyed reading about this charming 'virgin bud'!
What a charming poem, exciting, each line was musical, the flow of words, rhyme work, classic,10,
both of you are an inspiration to others thanks for an inspiring read-10
I am glad that you posted this. I often get inspired by posts here too. I am honored that it was I who inspired this. You inspire me too, Akhtar.
quite a tale and summation AJ, but please alter the spelling to 'stripped'.
This poem highlights that vantage point makes all the difference in how we perceive things. To a journalist she was news. To the artist a model etc. We form our opinion based on our own biases. Although an opinion can't ever be right or wrong (by definition) , it is often times that the truth eludes us all. She simply did something in a spontaneous moment. A very nice poem