Saturday, November 14, 2015

Being Inspired By Kelly Kurt's Poem Interpretation Comments

Rating: 5.0

It was too hot,
a sunny Sunday,
she went to a beach,
a virgin bud,
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Akhtar Jawad
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Mike Smith 12 March 2016

This poem highlights that vantage point makes all the difference in how we perceive things. To a journalist she was news. To the artist a model etc. We form our opinion based on our own biases. Although an opinion can't ever be right or wrong (by definition) , it is often times that the truth eludes us all. She simply did something in a spontaneous moment. A very nice poem

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Wes Vogler 25 November 2015

she wanted to strip she stripped for him couple of typos all else good ta Wes (Old Dad)

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Ayman Parray 16 November 2015

Great poem dear Akhtar, I read it on Kelly's 'Interpretation' page first and love it tremendously. You are truly gifted. Thank you.

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M Asim Nehal 16 November 2015

Nice dedication to a fellow poet, we all get inspiration from one other's poem...Nicely penned Janab....

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Seema Chowdhury 16 November 2015

A beautiful and a meaningful write, very well described.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 16 November 2015

Marvellous expression. An enjoyable poem shared really. Thanks for sharing dear Jawad sir....10

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Valsa George 15 November 2015

An absorbing tale told in great details! Enjoyed reading about this charming 'virgin bud'!

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Khalida Bano Ali 15 November 2015

A wonderful write................................10

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Musawir Raakh 15 November 2015

What a charming poem, exciting, each line was musical, the flow of words, rhyme work, classic,10,

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Loke Kok Yee 15 November 2015

both of you are an inspiration to others thanks for an inspiring read-10

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Kelly Kurt 14 November 2015

I am glad that you posted this. I often get inspired by posts here too. I am honored that it was I who inspired this. You inspire me too, Akhtar.

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Douglas Scotney 14 November 2015

quite a tale and summation AJ, but please alter the spelling to 'stripped'.

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