Wednesday, March 30, 2016

Being In Love Comments

Rating: 5.0

A tiny teen heart
Longing to live
In someone's heart
Nameless now for them
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Subhas Chandra Chakra
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Anita Aparajita Das 22 September 2017

Great poem on eternal love. Thank you poet for sharing this lovely poem with us.

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 28 February 2018

Thanks my dear for these nice words of encouragement. Sorry for being so late in responding.

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Sabita Sahoo 22 September 2017

Silver moon of moonlit sky, Anchors the night less dreams high Nights of endless waiting for him, Kindle the desire, yet keep her calm Great poem sir. Thanks. 10+++

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 28 February 2018

Thanks my dear Sabita for these nice words of encouragement. Sorry for being so late in responding.

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D Priyanka Singh 22 September 2017

Silver moon of moonlit sky, Anchors the night less dreams high Nights of endless waiting for him, Kindle the desire, yet keep her calm Ever she wanted a divine hug Timeless, Endless, embracing fog. This stanza has been superb. It initiates with a name Sanket.. Wow. Thanks for the lovely line hidden in the poem, I understood it. 10++++

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 28 February 2018

Thanks my dear Priyanka for these nice words of encouragement. Sorry for being so late in responding.

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Anamika Raj 27 August 2017

Well penned the feelings of a teen. Well done. Salute.

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 28 February 2018

Thanks my dear Anamika for these nice words of encouragement. Sorry for being so late in responding.

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Chinedu Dike 03 February 2017

Lovely and very profound. I like the articulation and clarity of your poems. Kudos! And do remain blessed.

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 28 February 2018

Thanks my dear Sir for these nice words of encouragement. Sorry for being so late in responding. Thanks.

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Anita Aparajita Das 17 May 2016

Silver moon of moonlit sky, Anchors the night less dreams high Nights of endless waiting for him, Kindle the desire, yet keep her calm Ever she wanted a divine hug Timeless, Endless, embracing fog. Yes I felt it..the need of the hour to be in love. thanks for reminding it, you know what..Nitu.

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 28 February 2018

Thanks Neetu my dear for these nice words of encouragement. Sorry for being so late in responding.

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Seema Sharma Rimi 16 May 2016

Silver moon of moonlit sky, Anchors the night less dreams high Nights of endless waiting for him, Kindle the desire, yet keep her calm Ever she wanted a divine hug Timeless, Endless, embracing fog. Loved the stanza. Beautiful. Thanks for the poem.

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 28 February 2018

Thanks my dear Rimi for these nice words of encouragement. Sorry for being so late in responding.

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Edward Kofi Louis 09 May 2016

Love! Kindle the desire. Nice work.

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Thank you Sir for visiting my page and inspiring. I am grateful to you. Subhas

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