Lord I do not wish
To hide from you,
I’m too lazy, I say
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what a simple poem....with dignity.....i like it......a wisdom of time reveals in a very touching soul...very nice..Thank you my friend and God bless
Recognizing is one thing, accepting that we are but humans is another...both well penned in here.
The mystery of existence in plain words. It is more than a prayer and God will surely listen. Lovely poem 10.
Being human is being powerless in so many aspects, and not knowing the right answer to everything... this is what I believe. Good poem.
Realisation is the greatest solution! Once done, the human becomes divine!
' You moulded me / From lowly clay / Am I to blame? ', I think these lines open up the whole mystry of the human being. Nice poetic thoughts, Eddie. Regards Naseer
'You molded me From lowly clay, Am I to blame? ' lovely lines...much impressive...a good plead towards God you make, Eddie...and quite reasonable and justifiable too...10
We all doubt our capability to please God, but please him we do when we thank him.
All the world is a stage on which we play the assigned role. In the drama innumerable souls, a little known and unknown much, enjoy its beauty as such, submit to Him and His Grace touch. CP
excellent write.....this one smartly brings out the struggle a human goes through.. 10 for sure.
Nice style.. I say you got it good. Amazing write, keep it up!
Nice, it really describes the thoughts that come into my mind from time to time! ! !