Saturday, January 31, 2009

Being Human Comments

Rating: 5.0

Lord I do not wish
To hide from you,
I’m too lazy, I say
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Eddie Roa
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Lost Skiing 10 May 2009

Nice, it really describes the thoughts that come into my mind from time to time! ! !

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Original Unknown Girl 14 April 2009

Fab scribings.... love it! HG: -) xx

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Gargi Saha 08 February 2009

A nice write...........................

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Antonio Liao 05 February 2009

what a simple poem....with dignity.....i like it......a wisdom of time reveals in a very touching soul...very nice..Thank you my friend and God bless

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Edgar Andrade Baguio 05 February 2009

Recognizing is one thing, accepting that we are but humans is another...both well penned in here.

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Sadiqullah Khan 05 February 2009

The mystery of existence in plain words. It is more than a prayer and God will surely listen. Lovely poem 10.

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Glenn Mark Amor 03 February 2009

Being human is being powerless in so many aspects, and not knowing the right answer to everything... this is what I believe. Good poem.

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Subbaraman N V 02 February 2009

Realisation is the greatest solution! Once done, the human becomes divine!

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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 02 February 2009

' You moulded me / From lowly clay / Am I to blame? ', I think these lines open up the whole mystry of the human being. Nice poetic thoughts, Eddie. Regards Naseer

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Kesav Easwaran 02 February 2009

'You molded me From lowly clay, Am I to blame? ' lovely lines...much impressive...a good plead towards God you make, Eddie...and quite reasonable and justifiable too...10

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Ted Sheridan 01 February 2009

We all doubt our capability to please God, but please him we do when we thank him.

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C. P. Sharma 01 February 2009

All the world is a stage on which we play the assigned role. In the drama innumerable souls, a little known and unknown much, enjoy its beauty as such, submit to Him and His Grace touch. CP

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Vaibhav Pandey 31 January 2009

excellent write.....this one smartly brings out the struggle a human goes through.. 10 for sure.

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Mimi Fakhira 31 January 2009

Nice style.. I say you got it good. Amazing write, keep it up!

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Eddie Roa

Eddie Roa

Manila. Philippines
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