Monday, October 15, 2007

Being Cool Comments

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I got mixed up with the wrong gang,
They smoked Marijuana and said lots of slang.
I said ‘sure, ’ just to be cool,
But now you know, that I was a fool.
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Fane 16 October 2007

Oh, why thank you! Most of my cousins smoke, my dad used to, and my grandpa did. My grandfather actually died because of smoking so I was pressed to make this poem.

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Sujatha J 16 October 2007

Good Message, all about NO Smoking. Nice one.

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Fane 15 October 2007

If you like this poem, you can add it to your favorite poems list! Oh, and I love constructive comments! (Good or Bad) - Fane

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