Being-Caged Bird Comments

A great poem ! The cry of the heart to be free to do the things he/she wants to do. Why can't we do what we love to do? We are bound..We have to find the reasons that bind our wings. Poet says- -A bird in cage is freer than this I It knows the reason why, it can not fly back to the sky - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - Poet says at last that when we lack our yearn for freedom, we can never be free. Yearn to be free yearn to be free

Beautifully expressed with the cry from your heart and soul for freedom of mind and spirit to change your life for what you want and to fly to open skies and not hide in the clouds any longer! Great write!

Great Poem, great lines

Excellent poetry Mary. I wrote something similar called 'If only'

I really liked reading this! Good writing. Very good.