That field was prolific
Battle thunder was in drift
Sob of life were in corners
Chase to capture with haste
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You have already four comments. I can not go beyond them. A praiseworthy write.
Thoughtful write on terrorist. Fantastic lines.... It's the moment of a rethink Life is not immortal to waste Lost hours that cannot redeem Vigor of life lounge in fitness One realises too late, especially in deathbed all the mistakes one committed. But peace is lost for ever. I loved reading it.
Very thoughtful poem on good concept of peace.......outstanding piece....
Culprit‘s name is worthless always Generosity creates history A thoughtful poem.
Very nice It's the moment of a rethink Live the moment with freshness Spread the hours of peacefulness Our hours should ring in peace! thank you
Marched on the field to sniff death To sip the blood shower as a beast A terrorist deliberately marches into the warfield to sniff death....! He never think that 'peace has her victories more renowned than war'! A great write!