Tuesday, October 21, 2014

Being Blind! Comments

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That field was prolific
Battle thunder was in drift
Sob of life were in corners
Chase to capture with haste
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Valsa George 30 October 2014

Marched on the field to sniff death To sip the blood shower as a beast A terrorist deliberately marches into the warfield to sniff death....! He never think that 'peace has her victories more renowned than war'! A great write!

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Ramesh Rai 24 October 2014

You have already four comments. I can not go beyond them. A praiseworthy write.

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Geetha Jayakumar 23 October 2014

Thoughtful write on terrorist. Fantastic lines.... It's the moment of a rethink Life is not immortal to waste Lost hours that cannot redeem Vigor of life lounge in fitness One realises too late, especially in deathbed all the mistakes one committed. But peace is lost for ever. I loved reading it.

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Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 22 October 2014

Very thoughtful poem on good concept of peace.......outstanding piece....

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Akhtar Jawad 21 October 2014

Culprit‘s name is worthless always Generosity creates history A thoughtful poem.

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 21 October 2014

Very nice It's the moment of a rethink Live the moment with freshness Spread the hours of peacefulness Our hours should ring in peace! thank you

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