Being Beauteous Comments

What a dreadful translation, aside from the typos and spelling errors!

Rouses intense and distinct emotions as well as images. Has the feel of the impressionist meeting the surrealist in a straightforward discussion.

this seems to me a description of the beatification, transubstantiation, and ascension of the virgin mary in a crepuscular winter barry farber

It appears as experiemental form and flow. And it reads well to me, I like it. Keep on pressing in this direction. I believe experiemental form is healthy, since obvious the 'old-school' is fading in popularity it would seem. We'll see though. Nice work.