Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
Wednesday, September 11, 2013

Being Alone Comments

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I feel bad being alone
As time passes and counting is done
Days seem to be very long
I hate now listening to the songs
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal
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Soumita Sarkar 11 September 2013

Why wife has to care and share and bear allllll the responsibility................?

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 11 September 2013

Feelings well written Diana Robillard-Hoy3 minutes ago I believe English is your second language, or this is a translation. Translations never seem to get the English quite right. I guess I am also more femenist than I thought as well, because I had to fight that to review your poem. Your beliefs are not mine but I defend your right to believe as you wish.Well Done! Comment 1 Comment+1 Hasmukh MehtaLess than a minute ago it is original coming from inner feeling. no translation as i am linguist plus english steno.. i have collection of about 45oo poem s

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 11 September 2013

i like it but it wavers at the end Bod hisattvaLess than a minute ago as above some good parts but thread is lost towards end Comment +1 not bad

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 11 September 2013

dzupaks velosoLess than a minute ago hold on. don't lose hope. Comment +1 Nice poem

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 11 September 2013

oluwasegun anthonyLess than a minute ago I love it

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 11 September 2013

I like it Marsha ElliottLess than a minute ago Nicely said. Comment +1 Very nice poem

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 11 September 2013

Dhirendra Kumar PandaLess than a minute ago I like it, Best Wishes

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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