Monday, August 6, 2012

Being A Woman Comments

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she simply smiles
her smile
closes her eyes
And looks away
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Shihabudheen K J 01 September 2012

It could have been more better provided a note with it.

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Shihabudheen K J 01 September 2012

It could have been more better provided a note with it.

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Shihabudheen K J 01 September 2012

It could have been more better provided a note with it.

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Shihabudheen K J 01 September 2012

It could have been more better provided a note with it.

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Shihabudheen K J 01 September 2012

It could have been more better provided a note with it.

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Sandra Feldman 28 August 2012

I smiled too when I read your very nice poem. So true, not to sin , we sometimes just smile and are quiet for quite a while

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