Wednesday, May 13, 2015

Being A Particle Of Life Comments

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Flowing down river, nowhere to hide, sun shining brightly
upon us, not being shielded by anything.

Filling our minds with what we are seeing on the way,
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RoseAnn V. Shawiak
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Kumarmani Mahakul 14 May 2015

Fantastic description. Nicely envisioned. A beautiful poem I like most. Many thanks dear Shawiak, keep the ball rolling.

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RoseAnn V. Shawiak

RoseAnn V. Shawiak

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