Wednesday, August 9, 2017

Being Comments

Rating: 5.0

The day arrived without much pomp or circumstance
....With clouds curling and dipping 'cross the heavens
While the sun raised her gentle arms in greeting - with warmth
......The river below flowed in a perfect rhythm
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Theodora (Theo) Onken
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Bill Cantrell 18 August 2017

A wonderful poem, to simply be! ! Yes my friend, it is the simple pleasantries of life that brings me to my knees, I love the dignity you attach to life in this delightful poem!

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Theodora Onken 04 September 2017

Oh, my! Thank you so much Bill! Am so happy you enjoyed this and took the time to comment as well! You are just too generous and kind!

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Susan Williams 11 August 2017

Gorgeous! Absolutely gorgeous! ! It's Wish-I'd- Written-It gorgeous! ! ! It is such a huge blessing to wake up to this world God has created for each and every one to enjoy to the height and depth of our souls. Which verse is the one that rang my chimes the most? All of them. Which image lingers the most? All of them. For innovative use of a word- -I would pick this one: And the birds, yes, the birds were feathering- - That is pure jewel-writing! Thank you for blessing my day with this! 10+++++++++++++++++++++ and a spot on my fav list

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Theodora Onken 04 September 2017

Susan! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Good Lord...had no idea you had been on to read and comment! Please excuse my careless ignorance! Your praise always raises my spirits - most especially when they need a lift. Really do have an excuse for not getting on here more though...it has to do with family and health. Anyway, thank you dear one! You are a pure gem - your writing shines like diamonds and your reviews are like 24 Karat Gold! ! ! ! ! ! Hugs! ! ! ! !

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Susan Williams 04 September 2017

Prayers for you and your family and for better health for you and all those you love. {{{{Hugs}}}} back atcha, my friend.

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Theodora (Theo) Onken

Theodora (Theo) Onken

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