Wednesday, October 19, 2005

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There is always a corner that
harbors dust.
No need to search; it will collect
and make itself a force
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barbara foster schutz
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Max Reif 26 October 2005

I get the sense that you're good at developing sustained metaphors. I'm going to read some more of your poems.

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Ernestine Northover 19 October 2005

You are so right, there! Look away for just a moment and Hey Presto! dust has appeared from nowhere and your cleaning once again. Nice write-up. Sincerely Ernestine Northover

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