Being Comments

Life becomes cyclic and the poet painted it well

Well articulated and nicely penned with conviction. An insightful piece of poetry. Thanks for sharing.

Water carries both cold and hot current and the flow of water is ever motivational. Water flows to serve others. Appearing and disappearing, forming and merging water dances with sweet ripple sound and you have captured an interesting imagery. This is an excellent poem beautifully penned...10

Hi Noushad, Wonderful poem. On the secrets and mysteries of Nature. Beautifully expressed. Brevity is the hallmark of your poems. Where ten words are needed to express something, you content yourselves with two. I look at your opening line, totally bewildered, astonished : : Under the curved blue: : You have not mentioned that it is SKY that you are speaking about. But one understands it. This is what poetry is all about. Great write. Keep it up! ! (Contd...)

part 2) Let me quote more: all in the ocean appearing and disappearing forming and merging again and again ever. Reading once again, I understand that you are speaking not just about sky or water or streams or ocean. It is about the human life as well; Do I find it a little philosophical! Hindu philosophy! ! On to mypoem list, so I'd come back for a re. A 100 is too little for this marvel! -unnikrishnan

simple and charming.... gave 10..

Thanks for such a nice poem. Nature has its own cycle which sustains life on earth. The poet, overwhelmed as he is by this eternal cycle, has captured this spirit into this poem beautifully.

dear poet, its so happy to read your poems more and more times.my best wishes to you to become a best poet in the world of poetry.. nazar malolmuku from Poem Hunter.

very nice poem a very thiking poem....simple but powerfull.....i like the poem for its flow toooo....please read....the idea of an idea..and whom do i belong to?

as all other poems of you, this is too indescribable....well done my beloved teacher...fayeda.

Hello Noushad Sir, My beloved teacher with a smile in his face always! I like this poem very much since I am an oceanographer! You are wonderfully talking about the hydrological cycle! Salt budget! Ofcourse, this an extremely simple way of expressing it! My hats off! This poem will be quoted everywhere when i am having a presentation! ! ! great to see u there!

Thoughtful and beautiful wording! 10+

well penned the flow of vapour and its changes.. regards sandhya

Dear poet. i like your poem but sometimes to much imagery and no meaning or feeling in the poem kills the point your trying to get across. other wise i found it very good.

dear poet this is such a nice poem. great job well done

I like this poem for a lot of reasons. I like that you dare to write about 'Being' ~ and it's not just your ego, it IS being, following a molecule of water ~ like how basic and essential can you get. And there is no judgement, no good or bad, hot and cold yes, flowing, aware, sensuous. And the poem flows, just like being does. Thank You for this gift. I look forward to reading/experiencing more of you poems.

Reads like the rebirth of spring. I like your poetry, it gives me wings. Bob

Amazingly written poem. The poem's core is its title.What a fantastic thought. Thank you very much, sir.

I am drawn to the title of your poem which is soul connected. A beautiful feeling after reading your lovely work. Divine sentiments woven in the spirit of your being. Blessings and regards, arya

''being''what a great title.it has captivated me.the poem is greater than its title. i love it.