Monday, June 28, 2010

Behold The Dreamer Comments

Rating: 5.0

Wide eyed the dreamer,
He's not asleep.
Yet he is dreaming,
Of the briney deep.
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Juan Olivarez
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Laura Byaruhanga 28 June 2010

this is one of the best poems i have read this year! you had me hooked till the end! it's not a short poem, but i wanted it to go on n on - a rare effect! excellent!

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Lynn Glover 28 June 2010

Juan we all are deamers and I think you have described it very well in this poem. All the dreams you cover here are the same as we dream in real life. A really great piece of work and a super thumbs up to you. A 10 my friend. Lynn

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