Behold Of The Splendid Ev'Nin' Comments

Soothing. A beautiful portrait with a good feel. Fantastic write.

A beautiful poem and so magnificently written. You so demurely dropped the g on the ending of some of the words which adds a lovely effect. Sounds like its going to be a good night for sleeping amidst all that calm. An excellent write Val.

Please excuse my spelling. Arthritic fingers. Lol.

This is an absilute masterpiece. So like the work of William Butler Yeats. Of whuch you ate un the same class val.

Every May a song bird sings of what May used to be....iip

In Nature we find lessons of life, the poem is a daring and positive attempt with bearing a strong message...i can say i heard the poem not read, such is the effect of sounds and elision! ! !

a beautiful write. nice presentation. I like this

this is amazing the structure and all just eloquent very soothing a peaceful poem loved it

You lost your g on your keyboard but boy that worked out great. Cheerful, soothing and uplifting and a joyful read-good to the last word

Night falls as we await the dawn of a bright new day.! Serene and peaceful! Superb write!

so soothing: magnanimous! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

Terrific diction and the mood is excellent.Soft and heartwarming.

Lovely verse, Valerie :) you stun me with your splendid write. -W

O how very lyrical, and how very nicely Sandra Feldman has appreciated it.As usual, another very lovely verse.

So everyone then awake’nin’ Set to greet the comin’ day A poem of great rhythm and beauty. Thank you.

Another beautiful, peaceful poem, that similtaneously soothes and stirs the soul. Very well done Valerie.

May you never stop awritin', For you've got so much to say, With such music in your verses, In a most delightful way.

Wow! Wow! Wow... another beautiful one :)

A splendid poem sing'in all the way. Best done in a northern accent 10/10

All secrets are still kept even at day. Liked the style of contracted words throughout as it altered the flow and meter. Well done.