Behold… A Marvelous Game! ! Comments

Good imagery....good poem

there are writers /poet, who have this style, the problem is it throws some peaple off, still not a bad poem............

this is really good. i like the imagery of poem.

it wasn't really that intentional...but yeah i was aware of it as it came out...i never thought that it was the speciality of the poem though! ! Thanx for pointing out! ! LuV VidZ

Good poem; I like the repetition of the 'd' sound. I suppose it was intentional?