Only Once..
After unison of my eye
With yours
Vis-a-vis
I learnt to rate myself!
I compared
All my skies,
My shapes,
Their Centres and circumferences!
And I turned at last
Into a mere map
In the geography book
Of your eyes.
I compared All my skies, My shapes, Their Centres and circumferences! And I turned at last Into a mere map In the geography book Of your eyes. Classic style and touchy lines.. Nice user of the words map and geography book. 10. Thanks.Nitu
Dear Neetu, Thanks dear for these nice words of encouragement.
Only once! To touch your heart with love. Thanks for sharing.
Thanks a lot. Thanks my dear Sir for these nice words of encouragement.
I compared All my skies, My shapes, Their Centres and circumferences! .. And I turned at last Into a mere map In the geography book Of your eyes. Beautiful lines from a beautifully written poem. Full marks. Thanks for sharing the poem.
Thanks my dear for the nice words of encouragement. Sorry for being so late in responding.
Seema der, Thanks my dear for these nice words of encouragement. Sorry for being so late in responding.
A lovely fantasy about eyelids...........love is nicely expressed...
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
And I turned at last Into a mere map In the geography book Of your eyes. Beautiful lines from a beautifully written poem. Full marks. Thanks for sharing the poem
Alina, Thanks dear for these nice words of encouragement.