Behind Those Known Eyelids Poem by Subhas Chandra Chakra

Behind Those Known Eyelids

Rating: 5.0


Only Once..

After unison of my eye

With yours

Vis-a-vis

I learnt to rate myself!



I compared

All my skies,

My shapes,

Their Centres and circumferences!



And I turned at last

Into a mere map

In the geography book

Of your eyes.

Saturday, April 16, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: eyes,longing,looks,love,love and art,love and dreams,love and friendship,love and life,you
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Alina Kaikeyi 21 November 2017

And I turned at last Into a mere map In the geography book Of your eyes. Beautiful lines from a beautifully written poem. Full marks. Thanks for sharing the poem

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 28 February 2018

Alina, Thanks dear for these nice words of encouragement.

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Anita Aparajita Das 17 May 2016

I compared All my skies, My shapes, Their Centres and circumferences! And I turned at last Into a mere map In the geography book Of your eyes. Classic style and touchy lines.. Nice user of the words map and geography book. 10. Thanks.Nitu

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 28 February 2018

Dear Neetu, Thanks dear for these nice words of encouragement.

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Edward Kofi Louis 17 May 2016

Only once! To touch your heart with love. Thanks for sharing.

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 28 February 2018

Thanks a lot. Thanks my dear Sir for these nice words of encouragement.

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Seema Sharma Rimi 08 May 2016

I compared All my skies, My shapes, Their Centres and circumferences! .. And I turned at last Into a mere map In the geography book Of your eyes. Beautiful lines from a beautifully written poem. Full marks. Thanks for sharing the poem.

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 28 February 2018

Thanks my dear for the nice words of encouragement. Sorry for being so late in responding.

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 28 February 2018

Seema der, Thanks my dear for these nice words of encouragement. Sorry for being so late in responding.

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Kishore Kumar Das 18 April 2016

A lovely fantasy about eyelids...........love is nicely expressed...

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Subhas Chandra Chakra

Subhas Chandra Chakra

Sainkul, Anandapur, Odisha, India
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