Behind This Wall Comments

Sounds like 'once bitten twice shy' - another flowing set of words with a sharp message! Great work Viola. Regards Mark

we all need walls in our life or we would have more Dangers in the word. Becca

Great complexity of thoughts in your poems. Makes the reader stop and think. A '10! ' from me. Best Wishes, Marilyn

A rel good poem, Viola. Ron

Honey drips from honest lips...great line.. a good read... flows beautifully.

superb lines, this surreal wall is our inner cloister where if not invaded security will foster

We each have our own 'protective wall'; solid and secure but penatrative if we let down our guard, especially when love invades ones space. Well done -A ten from me.

This has a fantastic rhythm to it, the structure sounds easy, and yet is not uniform. Love the flow. Well done.

I like this poem. It is well written.

To protect or to repel... either one is factual! But man has pride from which comes THIS WALL? High marks.

Its great in its the truest honesty and it is to be expected from you my Super V. f/f GOD bless, Owen.

A pretty nice piece, behind the wall is a gem, the true beauty of you...only the heart could see.

Yes a lovely piece, most walls have doors, and kdoors have keys.But your right why should you. regards Tom 10++

Because you are you and when that person scales that wall he will find happiness beyond compare, lovely write Viola 10 Chris

You heart's wakeful verses.A catchy write.Thank you

No need for any invasion...for, with in the wall of your heart is the 'invader'...and all is there for a free ‘take’...and what a take it could be! To know, listen to the second stanza lines...if only, he knows! Super sensitive poetic lines, Viola...my ten for this

Exactly :) Gosh, you're good. Lovely poem, clever and beautiful images. All the best to you!