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As you know, I fully understand your poem, Sue and relate to it 100 per cent. You express the agony behind the facade, perfectly. Chrissie :)

Very nicely written Susan. Rusty

A nice take on a well-trod subject in poetry. As for the rabbit, usually it's a deer in the headlights, so 2 points for your variation. Another 2 points for not using the word 'mask.'

Nice one Susan I gave you a 10. Hugs Jan