Sunday, June 10, 2012

Behind This Silent Window Pane Comments

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Can you hear me?
As I whisper your name.
When I pound my fists upon the pane.
When I scream out to you is it all in vain?
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Amber Glistener
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Guy Lip-more 18 June 2014

Full of pure emotion, very good write.

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Kyra Schaneel 21 June 2012

I really like this. your very good. :)

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Tiffany M... 21 June 2012

I'm absolutely speechless. This poem is so heartrending and captivating... You paint such a clear picture of this scene... You're an outstanding poet; I can't wait to see how much more you have in store!

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