Behind The Wall Comments

A sad reality that will never end corruption and greed has always been the trend.

I agree with Shaun Cronick, you have penned a powerful poem with latent images. A First Class poem deserves more the the maximum 5*. Poemhunter should make this poem Poem of the Day

Each and every line of this poem tickles the mind.... so discerning.

Beautiful, beautiful poem full of metaphors and embellished with crystalline images. A striking title that can fuel the mind to read this marvelous write.

Dear poet Valsa, I want to thank you for this professional comment on my poem, really your golden speech has to be written on the wall of every dictator's palaces: (The zealots of power are steeped in corruption and the immediate victims are suffering....! But its ramifications are far reaching and will spare no one) . all the best and kind regards

The zealots of power are steeped in corruption and the immediate victims are suffering....! But its ramifications are far reaching and will spare no one. Definitely the corrupt also will have to pay a price! Great write, Soran

This poem again is in surrealistic mode! If you had not given the explanation in the writer's notes, i couldn't have got the heads or tails of it....! I knew it to be deep. But such deep poems can only float over my head....! Yes, behind the wall or under cover many things happen, but are never disclosed to the ordinary public.!

Well done Rose, I am agree with you, the corruption is a way leading to oppression, social problems and dictatorship as well, it is existed in different forms, in so many places; but some where are worse than the others; in the end all have to pay the penalty for accepting it.

Beautifully crafted and well executed write. The underlying message, so powerful, will be imprinted in the mind of a reader. A great poem. To my Poem List.

Another poem of great depth with a meaningful message. An expose of government traitors who only wish to concentrate material wealth and power for themselves, family nd friends. Public welfare is never in their vocabulary. Corruption in all its forms must be abhorred and anyone who practices corruption must be unseated from government posts and must return to the people all things they corrupt, .

Corruption is one of the most dangerous social ills. It can deliver a rich country to darkness and extreme poverty and injustice. The gap between the rich and the poor widens making the rich richer and the poor poorer. Corruption is a reach area of revolution.

The opening lines of this great poem grip a reader because of its powerful images and words.Crafted so beautifully to create a strong attachment and sway you to continue reading until the end of this write.

Dear poet Susan Williams your academic views and comment on my poem giving strength to it, your encouragement is appreciated, take care and Thanks

Thank you for the author's notes about the poem... that filled in the gaps in my knowledge so that I could more fully feel the pain and agony this poem is exposing in very powerful words and hard-hitting style. 10++++++++++

A truthful write that is in plain sight for all the world to see what should NOT be........well penned.

This is fantastic writing- -the poem is complex, rich in imagery, has emotional impact through word choice and imagery, and layers upon layers. This is a poem that requires reading and thinking and more rereading and thinking- -the mark of an important piece of literature. 10++++++++ and onto my fav list and you go onto my fav poet list

Behind the veil! ! Only with the truth; Behind the wall! ! ! ! Full of trouble. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

Atmospheric indeed Soran. Powerful and potent images are conjured up for all readers to dwell and interpret. There's are two old adage's that spring to mind... Power corrupts and absolute power corrupts absolutely. And what goes around comes around. I firmly believe in both especially the latter. 10 ++ and added to my payback favs. Thanks Soran and take care.