Monday, June 6, 2011

Behind The Veil Comments

Rating: 5.0

Through a thin veil
There is a light
That is so pure
That is so white
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A.E.J. Jordan
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Chinedu Dike 04 October 2014

Anyone that experiences the LIGHT OF SALVATION will never be blind again. In Christian religion we call it BEING BORN AGAIN, Your spirit is transformed completely and you experience absolute peace. A lovely poem written with insight. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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Mohammad Akmal Nazir 07 June 2011

Great poem. Rich in imagery and style. Wonderfully conceived. Liked it. I rated it 10/10. Please read and write my poem 'A humble complaint' on page 2.

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A.E.J. Jordan

A.E.J. Jordan

Detroit, MI
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