Friday, May 5, 2006

Behind The Sunflowers Comments

Rating: 5.0

While sitting one day in my garden
writing things I'd like to say
a little girl of five or six
came asking if I'd like to play
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Charles M Moore
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Not a member No 4 25 February 2007

Hauntingly innocent. You've captured and portrayed something that lies deep within all of in this very well structured poem, in language that is ideal for the subject. Great writing Mr Moore. jim

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Sandra Fowler 14 May 2006

This one has an other worldly glow. I envy you your lovely ghost. Kindest regards, Sandra

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Con Nie 12 May 2006

What a lovely poem. It describes such a touching scene. Thanks for sharing it. Sincerely, Connie Webb

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Linda Ori 08 May 2006

Lovely, warm and peaceful. Is she a figment of your imagination from some long forgotten time? Precious read - thank you. Linda

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Will Barber 05 May 2006

Thanks for the alert - would have hated to miss this one. Lewis Carroll pursues the divine. Aren't little girls the most precious gift to the man? And anyway, I think she is your soul.

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Patricia Gale 05 May 2006

A tender loving write. A child and a Father figure. The finest write I have read all day! Take Care Patricia Gale

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Charles M Moore

Charles M Moore

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