While sitting one day in my garden
writing things I'd like to say
a little girl of five or six
came asking if I'd like to play
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This one has an other worldly glow. I envy you your lovely ghost. Kindest regards, Sandra
What a lovely poem. It describes such a touching scene. Thanks for sharing it. Sincerely, Connie Webb
Lovely, warm and peaceful. Is she a figment of your imagination from some long forgotten time? Precious read - thank you. Linda
Thanks for the alert - would have hated to miss this one. Lewis Carroll pursues the divine. Aren't little girls the most precious gift to the man? And anyway, I think she is your soul.
A tender loving write. A child and a Father figure. The finest write I have read all day! Take Care Patricia Gale
Hauntingly innocent. You've captured and portrayed something that lies deep within all of in this very well structured poem, in language that is ideal for the subject. Great writing Mr Moore. jim