Behind The Smiles Comments

nice piece of write up you penned. keep it up!

One of the greatest gifts of God is the human life to love and serve. You have along life to live; be positive, be cheerful, be optimistic, love all, serve all. You will find this life verily a heaven!

Great write Sameera, thanks for sharing. Siya_! !

Tnks 4 sharing with us, keep it up.

i love this poem......it's so true, i call it poetic war!

Great Write. Always keep smile.

Great Write. Always keep smile.

These verses touch the heart of the reader very much. I think your talent for poetry is really big. There is nothing wrong with being sad. It is a very normal feeling. Let the bitterness run through the veins for a while, cry it out loud. When I am sad, I try to spend some time in nature. A beautiful spot can give so much energy. Prayerful reflection in nature often shows me the way out of my sadness If the sight of our eyes and the hearing of ears is still ours, we have so many blessings If we look really deep iin our soul, our soul knows the truth. I think you will enjoy reading my poems, 'Y.. A deep valley', page3 and 'when your heart is hopelessly broken', page1.

Don't ever give in to depression! This is only a passing phase. If winter comes can spring be far behind, A very powerful write though the melacholic tone is a little haunting! ! Thanks for the invitation! !

Nice poem but you can do one hundred better things than death

Be strong Sameera, i understand the feeling, yes i know....but i believe you are stronger inside, there must be something that down you, No No dont listen to it fight it and your smile will glow like sun in the universe at least moon at night! _Soul

You write dark very well.

nicely written..showing intense emotions..god bless ur talent/...