'Behind The Smile' Comments

Great story line, and narrative l

I can surly relate!

Funny and nice to read. God bless you

You seem to always have good narrative stories to share. Narrative poems are my favourite. It's a lovely poem and I enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem THE PHOENIX STRANGLER.

A beautiful smile especially when it's from the heart can be very alluring. Just a touch of hint from it can cause the heart to skip a beat. Very good write.

Her elusive smile is baffling..... You would like to decipher the secret code behind it. Couldn't it be Love? I am sure you adore both her beauty and style! Enjoyed! Thanks for visiting my page and for the sweet comment!

Another good one. Was she the Mona Lisa, I wonder? Enjoyed this one too.

it is very tough to imagine behind the smile but easy to swear. lovey write

she will always be 2 steps ahead. this is a well written poem that says what all us men have tried at least once in our lives.

Great and at the same time you have beautifully pictured the agony of one's heart. Lovely poem.Great ease and flow as ever. Marks 10

simply beautiful is this poem!

'I used to flatter her with sweet pleasantries knowing she would read between the lines' RAB

Wow Bernard, it is a master piece :) ....... All the lines, the whole poem it is adorable..... It is lovely :) ..... Love can make you do wonders... And here is one such... I am loving it :)

I simply love reading this poem.Lot of worldly wisdom and well balanced lines. I give marks 10 this lovely poem.