Behind The Rich Harvest Comments

Such a beautiul flow of words here. The use of short lines in the latter half of the poem adds to the rich effect of describing the deplorable conditions in which our farmers are working all through the year. Fantastic work. A 10++++ here.

With meagre wages! ....I agree with this...a rich fkow throughout10++

vow! really revolutionary and touching poem posted10 surya

One of the good write........in every work there is always thirst/quench/shame/humiliation........... but on land when farmers suffer this is something different who are feeding us. An wonderful write. Sincere thanks for your kind sharing.

A vivid portrait! Matured writes.

Heart-felt portrayal.Thanks for sharing

You are not afraid to view the harshness of this world and to speak up for those who suffer and bear heavier burdens. Your words are very strong and images vivid for this serious message.

.. and whilst you are behind the richest deliberations to the siphoning of those harvests... voices will continue to grow healthier seeds.. keep Righting them One Peace at a Time..

honesty is the hall mark of good poetry...these life bearing lines tell us how an honest poet can not but sing about truths of life strikingly bare such as these...in the opening stanzas words rhyme sweetly perfectly well...*10*

Behind the rich harvest there is always a 'harvest of shame'. GW62 'Harvest Of Shame'--Edward R. Murrow documentary from the 1950's

This poem: fantastic. It's so rhythmic..... you have described what you know so well well enough for others to imagine it... a great achievement. Keep it up. :)

Your yield here is plentiful grain(s) ... advertising a wealthy gift by lifting first world commodity wage pitted against poverty rage